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kkhanna

106 Posts

Posted - 03/27/2008 :  3:11:12 PM
Hey guys and Gals,


I am about to send out an email introduction of myself to some propects.

Anyone have a good write up I can modify and use. Any help is mightily appreciated!

I am writing to prospects that have been reffered by my realtor and this would be my 1st time writing to them. Anyone have something they have used before that ahs worked?


Thanks guys


I can be e-mailed at kunal@avanmortgage.com or you can post it on here.


Thanks again
monarchdad

1811 Posts

Posted - 03/27/2008 :  3:12:41 PM
I would suggest calling and just talking with them rather than emailing.
craigppls

696 Posts

Posted - 03/27/2008 :  3:34:17 PM
then comes the begging...LOL
CoolMtgGuy

3725 Posts

Posted - 03/27/2008 :  3:40:51 PM
Hello John/Jane,

I called and left you a message at 3:00 pm today. (note the email should go out AFTER the call).

Your Realtor asked me to call on you becuase she knows that I deliver what I promise and she undoubtedly wants to ensure that you have the benefit of my serivces.

Blah blah blah ....
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mustang05

214 Posts

Posted - 03/27/2008 :  3:45:17 PM
quote:
Originally posted by CoolMtgGuy

Hello John/Jane,



Blah blah blah ....



I'll have to try that sounds like it would be a hit :)
barnucci

455 Posts

Posted - 03/27/2008 :  3:48:57 PM
"I was told to give you a call by your ______, and I promised them that I would"
dkendall1979

10342 Posts

Posted - 03/27/2008 :  3:52:14 PM
"Hello, this is _______ calling from the mortgage company. Please call me back at 555-1212".

That's gotten a ton of call backs for me.

Email:

"Hello Mr/Mrs Poopface, have you acquired mortgage financing yet?"

That's gotten the best email response out of every elaborate, well thought out email that i've ever come up with.
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